That's strange... It seemstto me like a chapter is skipped at the end... I do not get what has happened to Sahana? I've been preparing myself for a tearful ending when she dies... 'cause of cancer or something like that.. But here... The ending seems a little abrupt... And Aiba seems a little too cheerful with another woman... I was ready for an ending, that would make my heart ache in pain for both of them, I was ready to feel some emptiness inside of me... And such... disappointment.... If i was the author (and I've been practicing in stories-writing in my native Russian) I would at least make a small notice in the end that Aiba at least remembers Sahana... And what we have here is only his piss-fetish. I'm really sad, that while the whole story has been sooo cute and full of emotions and it ends so disappointing. Like everything before was just a dream.
