Episode 2:
In the end... Meh. Messed-up pacing (as if to show as much barely understandable stuff as possible), extremely unclear motivation and relationship of the characters... I understand that it's just the 2nd episode, but generally you need to start shaping these things up by now, if you could not do that in 1st episode.
It's definitely good in terms of weird psychological imagery of the mind, but it seems like this imagery is shown just for the sake of being shown with little "backstory" felt behind it. It feels as my early attempts at writing, when the end-product was vivid, fast, brutal, edgy stuff. And I did try to rewrite it several times to give it more weight in the end. This one needs more work still.
