Firstly, I really do not like how the characters look. They are extremely shiny. That does not make sense to have this many flares all over them. It's as if there are dozens of light sources in each scene, even when the only light source is the sun.
But there are lot of other things that do not seem to make much sense to me:
- Why would what looks like middle/highschoolers got to classroom of juniors? And as if they were the only people expected there considering the traps.
- What was even the point of that, when they straight cut to some "tour" right after?
- Why does the green-haired girl carries a gun?
- Satoko seems to be a bully, considering the traps, buy why is she also such a crybaby? Pick one trait.
- The shot of how Satoko sits down to eat food is... Inappropriate in the context. It's like "we are not lolicons, but here's some loli-crotch, but we are not sexualizing it, so be calm about it".
- Too sudden a cut to some nonsense about a card game
- It looked as if he was clearing up the dump that was lower than him, while remaining on the same height and not using any tools. Are his arms that long? Or did I miss something? Anyway it looked a bit unnatural to me.
I will give it a chance for the next 1-2 episodes, but so far, as someone who want to become a narrative designer, I am dissatisfied.
