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#628

Simbiat
Simbiat

This is trash. People do not talk like that with each other. They do not interact with each other like that. This is at best like stories, that I wrote when I was, like, 14. And, at least, I did realize, that they were bad. Things happening make little to no sense here, too. Especially how the guy is somehow uber-powerful, yet he is banished for being level 1. I somehow doubt he would be able to not use any powers at any point in time before that. He could hold back a bit, yes, but not use them at all? I doubt it, simply based on goody-shoes character he is. And the girl is also a saint that can heal anything (apparently), but her guard is not aware of that. And the guy's voice is so annoying.